The Official Writing Challenge
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A neat little story about the opposite gender; not being able to say "love", speak of "love"...that's just the way it is. A nice job by the author, however, in expressing love.
great, believable dialogue, with lovely interpositions of description. nice work
Hmmmm....Interesting! so that is the male perspective of love! Thanks for giving away one of the secrets of the man code. I promise not to tell.
You did a great job here. The dialogue was so believable and flowed smoothly.
Love the dialogue in this story! A male perspective on love. Well written!
I really enjoyed this article, it is harder for men to show love the way a mother can show it. A very good job of writing.
Oh! This is so precious! Your characters come alive in their dialog. You get your message out, through their words, better than someone preaching a sermon. This is as polished as it can be. God bless your writing!
p.s. I forgot what I came here, for! Just a note to say thank you for your comment on my entry this week. I am honored to have you take notice! Thanks!