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05/06/06
A neat little story about the opposite gender; not being able to say "love", speak of "love"...that's just the way it is. A nice job by the author, however, in expressing love.
05/07/06
great, believable dialogue, with lovely interpositions of description. nice work
05/08/06
Hmmmm....Interesting! so that is the male perspective of love! Thanks for giving away one of the secrets of the man code. I promise not to tell.
You did a great job here. The dialogue was so believable and flowed smoothly.
05/09/06
Love the dialogue in this story! A male perspective on love. Well written!
05/15/06
I really enjoyed this article, it is harder for men to show love the way a mother can show it. A very good job of writing.
05/31/06
Oh! This is so precious! Your characters come alive in their dialog. You get your message out, through their words, better than someone preaching a sermon. This is as polished as it can be. God bless your writing!
05/31/06
p.s. I forgot what I came here, for! Just a note to say thank you for your comment on my entry this week. I am honored to have you take notice! Thanks!