The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/06
Ahhhh, there you are indeed! I really enjoyed this. No greater prize than to be acknowledged, appreciated and loved!!! Very well written too!
I love this! You portray a most endearing element of God's love without a single preachy word. Your great play on words, "forgettable, unforgettable" hooked me. Then, "What if we always greeted each other with such joy? It changes the color of the room." You said it all in a single brush stroke.
I hope this piece scores high!
05/08/06
Beautiful writing
05/10/06
I will take notice the way I great others, especially those I hold dear. Great entry!!