The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very touching and hit close to home. My grandmother did the same thing, waiting on her boy to arrive, then she just went to sleep. Thanks.
It was a bit confusing at the beginning as I thought the daughter-in-law was writing her interpretation of each day; then having (3)three days mentioned before the Son would arrive, I thought it Was Christ; then it finally began to make sense...and it was a lovely story.
I imagine that lots of people can relate to what you have written so well. I am convinced that my own mother hung on until I arrived - more accurately I suppose, God gave her the strength and allowed me the privilege to get there before the end. Well done.
Oh so touching. What a great telling. Touched emotions deep inside. You've done good!