The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/06
Such a clever entry - I had to track down the original lyrics because once I started reading they raced through my mind:

Here is one verse:

Help, I need somebody,
Help, not just anybody,
Help, you know I need someone, help.

When I was younger, so much younger than today,
I never needed anybody's help in any way.
But now these days are gone, I'm not so self assured,
Now I find I've changed my mind and opened up the doors.


You did such an excellent job - we could sing your lyrics to the old tune and they would fit perfectly.

Bravo!
I like your creative spin of the topic!
Oh geesh - no one but you could do this, Ben! I'm sitting here laughing and crying and singing to my husband and he thinks I've totally flipped my lid. All because of you......so thanks, Benji, I own you one. LOL :-)


No no, don't "own" you anything, but "owe" ------

Hmmmmm.