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This needs to be longer! I want more of their story. Well done.
Blessings
07/20/24
What a wonderful, emotionally charged story…really enjoyed his journey!
07/22/24
A gripping story!I was pulled in right from the start.
Good to be reminded that all saints are "works in progress"
Well done!
Loved this gripping story. Thanks for sharing.
07/25/24
I was judge for this topic so could not comment before. This made me laugh out loud, and was a great read. Well done on your win!
Congratulations!
08/02/24
This story clearly demonstrates the danger of giving into offence. While anger itself is not a sin (Jesus Himself got angry), but anger can very easily lead to sin. Thus why the Bible warns us to be angry but sin not, and to not let the sun go down on our anger.
09/27/24
An absolutely amazing story! You brought me straight into the room. I've known many men like Nick, and can relate so much to the pull between wanting to follow the Lord yet being overtaken by my humanity
10/04/24
What a powerful reminder of the danger of anger and yet the abundant forgiveness of our loving Father. Good thing He is patient with us! That old zombie of our sinful nature certainly has a powerful tug now and then. St. Nicolas was noted for giving gifts to children as a picture of our heavenly Father giving the ultimate gift of His Son to us His adopted children.
10/05/24
Love this.A beautiful read
10/10/24
Now you can't just leave us hanging here, Miss Ellen. We need a novella or a Hallmark movie script or something.
The title drew me in and the story kept me to the end. It wasn't what I was expecting at all and I loved every single minute of it.
That's a good woman he found and that is how a Christian godly marriage is supposed to be. As a single thirty-something young lady, it gives me hope.