The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/06
Good approach to the story. I would leave the reference to the jailor out of your "punch line" at the end. It can stand by itself. Good job.
Good take on one of my favorite stories in the Bible.
02/17/06
Very well done - I could see this done as a skit.
02/18/06
wow .. .this really DOES read like a play or skit... or a radio drama. Nice take on the story and good approach.
02/20/06
I enjoyed the journalistic style of your article. Would make an excellent ministry piece to the sceptic. A deity to be reckoned with indeed! Excellent ending, Melanie!