The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/20
Absolutely loved your story. Great dialogue too.
Great use of slang. Easy dialogue between you and the cell mates.
Great job! I tried to do an entry with 70s slang and it was just too cheesy, so I deleted it and started over.
Cool beans!
05/26/20
Interesting!
05/27/20
Great entry. Yes, it is a different language and I guess as much as Maggie needed to teach them English, she needed to learn their lingo.