The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/06
Beautifully written. And very much truth, the time is getting close at hand. I don't know much about poetry, is not using punctuation proper now? Either way, the message is wonderfully told!
Great images, truthful message. A vivid, passionate expression of the times we live in.
Very powerful. Great word pictures.
01/26/06
The rhythm flowed pretty well until the 6th verse - then it went flat. However, the message of Dooms Day is loud and clear - and it is predicted well in your piece. Nicely done, and thank you for sharing your talent with us.
01/26/06
Oh, how I love your last verse!
01/26/06
Can't wait! Come Lord Jesus! You did a great job portraying these times and what has begun! Great use of words - great discriptions. I really enjoyed this!
01/26/06
Wow!!!!
Atom and sun may not rhyme, but despite that, this was still beautifully written! (I can't imagine it getting much better if you didn't rush in the wee hours to write it! hehehe) Great job Crista.
01/29/06
Loved it. Loved it. Bravo. Very strong writing! Congrats!
Wonderful poem capturing that epic moment we all look forward to in faith and hope!
01/30/06
Such great imagery, Christa. Paticularly liked: 'On their knees to tie the sheaves
Saints devote themselves to pray'. Yeggy
01/31/06
What powerful words and content. Well done! Both a beginning and an end wrapped up here.