The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/18
Cool story!
I couldn't write anything like this but it was fun to read.
02/21/18
Great job with the topic!
Blessings~
02/23/18
Well done Robin! Your 3rd place is well-deserved for this story. I like the way you've used the topic in two ways, the second to be bewilderment of the MC.
02/23/18
I meant to say 'to the bewilderment of the MC.'
02/23/18
Awesome job! Third place overall!!! :)
02/24/18
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish this week, Robin.

It seems that Gloria grew up too fast physically and her mind and body are trying to catch up. I liked how this week's topic was double utilized.
02/24/18
Congratulations on also winning 1st place in the Advanced category.

I'm sure you'll rise to the Master's category quickly.
02/26/18
Great writing, Robin, and a good story. Congratulations.
03/31/18
Well done! Congratulations on your win!
04/12/18
Congratulations for placing 1st place in the quarterly division for this story.

You have a gift of making your characters come alive.
04/13/18
This story held my interest. Well written. Congratulations on your win.
04/14/18
So nicely written. I couldn't imagine where the story was going and I was pleasantly surprised. Loved the inner dialogue.
I couldn’t stop smiling at all your references to an era gone by, from the songs and dress, to the slang spoken. I could feel my emotions fluctuating along with Toni, as she observed Gloria with mixed emotions; admirations for her wildness and thankfulness to not be like her, all rolled into one. It took me back 60 years. Thanks for the delightful journey.

I was pleased with the ending. Good triumphs over evil. Excellent piece.