The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice that you could see God's hand even in your trials, respond rightly, and give him glory. Hope you heal quickly.
Interesting story.
03/09/17
Very good point. We all need pruning at one time or another. I don't know how much of the topic is intertwined in your story. Might get a ding for that. I thing if you rearranged some paragraphs and put your injury first with a good hook to draw your readers in and then follow with the orchards and pruning. It would flow better. Good thoughts. Thanks and God bless.