The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/16
This story kept me interested to the end. I like your concise sentences that kept the action moving along.I was even a little disappointed when Harry turned out to be a cop.
Congratulations, Raymond, on your 10th place EC. I enjoyed the suspense, even when I found out that the MC was a crook, not a private investigator. Great twist!
Congratulations and great job!

God bless.
11/25/16
Congratulations, Raymond, on winning an EC award. Clever twist on the ending. I thought for sure that the MC was a P.I.

I am a big fan of your writing. I have enjoyed watching you move up the ranks.
11/29/16
Congratulations Raymond. Excellent read!
12/22/16
Nicely conceived story. I enjoyed it and thought you did a good job job illustrating a bad guys POV. Congratulations on your level win and EC placing.