The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/16
nice story! Especially the last bit about the Golden Rule. If we all treated others how we would like to be treated, what a wonderful world it would be.
08/23/16
Well done. My only red ink was a double negative: nobody's got nothing on me. That may not be accurate, but that was the gist of the sentence.
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