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07/25/16
Thanks for sharing this heart breaking story. The flowers added an interesting touch making the story personal. If the story is true, you have my deepest regrets that your child has endured such difficulty.
07/27/16
Wow, this story really tears at the heart... I suspect it is true, and I pray all goes well from this day forward for you daughter and grandchildren. Frightening is it not, how some people can manifest such a split personality.
07/27/16
Interesting story. Sad ending.

You wrote "at the start of a ten year drought" ... when a drought starts no one knows how long it will last. Perhaps you could have removed 'ten year' and get the point across.