The Official Writing Challenge
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06/10/16
wow! That was on topic, and riddled with suspense. I certainly enjoyed it.
06/16/16
Great story. The vision was powerfully symbolic. I admired the MC promptly obeying the Lord to his calling. Red ink: There was a bit of info dumping in the first para. which could have been spread out through a longer story. Still, great story.