The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/15
There is such a peace and joy that blankets a believer when delving into the Word and spending time alone with Him, as your story so clearly shows.

Powerfully done...

God bless~
05/09/15
I like how you didn't give a quick fix to your MC's problems by the end of the story but could also believe with her when that day does happen. You showed us where her strength came from, not told us or preached it to us. I like that.
05/09/15
P.S. Sorry...I forgot to add one red ink issue...it would really help your reader, if you would leave a line in between the paragraphs. Thanks for sharing.