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05/03/14
Fantastic job! I loved the ending in which you touch the readers with almost a "prayer like surrender to God" about the dangers of technology, although not against them, yet still speaking about the potential "side affects" from their existence.

Great work here!!!

God bless~
05/04/14
An informative article.
Twenty years ago, I did two years of missionary service in a remote area of Zimbabwe. Our fridge was paraffin powered, our iron charcoal powered and our hot water wood powered. Like the Ruth in your article, I appreciated the relationships we made way back then.
05/05/14
Very moving and convicting entry - I could feel the passion.

Noticed a few typos in the beginning, but not a big deal.

You write passionately - I can see why you're here in advanced :) Thanks for posting!
05/07/14
Very interesting article and informative write! I envy the Ruths as well!