The Official Writing Challenge
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The fast-paced dialogue kept my interest throughout. The conclusion is truly touching and the title is fantastic. This is a great piece of writing!
I agree! This dialogue is so well written! Very real!
This is wonderful. Well written, but it seems like the start of something more.
I was just getting into it.
Beautiful characters.
Writing style: awesome!
Many readers will relate to this one. Good job.
This is a pleasing, delightful, very good, beautiful piece of writing about a terrible... oh you get the message - Deni
Whew..I'm tired for her! great pace and great reminder of how we need to be out there. I thought the people were so realistic! Very good!!
True to life and so well told. And that's one of my favorite verses. Great job.
Great job! The fast pace was just enough to get us really involved without driving us nuts.
Congrats on such a great entry Debbie. This was my favorite sentence I stop abusing myself
Nicely done - you brought the reader "inside" your character! I bet most of us have found ourselves in a similar spot.
I liked this! It was fun to read and hit home so hard! Thanks
Unfortunately, I've had a few of those days myself! Great story:)
Very realistic the way the emotions of the characters are expressed.
Such a realistic portrayal of a working day, interaction of characters and your characters thoughts! A fast paced story that packs a punch at several levels. Yeggy