The Official Writing Challenge
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Too funny! Well done on such a clever plot.
Delightful! Your poems in the story were gems! Really enjoyed this.
Immediately I liked the shop owner and by the end, I loved him. You described the differently beautiful girls perfectly in the poems. Great work!
What a clever man to think of those two poems so quickly! Good story!
Oh, I was worried that you were wrapping such a poignant message into a fairy tale - but the ending made everything fall into place. Your point of view is a little vague, but overall, this is a delightful, entertaining and creative story!
Good commentary on the topic - and very entertaining! Good job. I enjoyed reading this. :-)
Unique perspective! I liked this alot!
Oh, I loved this one! Well done!
Very nice, made me smile, thanks.
Harsh critic that I am...I find this story a beautiful gem! Nicely done! compelling poetry.