The Official Writing Challenge
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Good message. A battle that needs fought much these days.
10/31/05
very good, very real, very relevent and very well-written.
10/31/05
I agree; well done.
11/01/05
Yes, this is very relevant and timely. I think this would benefit readers everywhere.
11/01/05
So very true. And how many fall so to this little box, keeping us from the true love of our lives. A very good message.
11/02/05
This is extremely powerful, and written in an allegorical style. The "forgotten piece of chicken" seemed out of place--maybe a less mundane metaphor would work better? But that's nit-picky, this is strongly written and really packs a punch.
11/02/05
Well written!! I was sitting there watching his battle!!
Skillfully written. Really draws the reader in. And again, very timely!
11/04/05
This was relative, creative and who would have thought! Really good! God bless, littlelight
11/07/05
Sandra, I just wanted to stop by quickly to let you know that your entry did very well in the Fragrance Challenge. You ranked 24th overall (out of 145 entries), which is excellent. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)