The Official Writing Challenge
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God brought her full circle! What a wonderful ending. I truly have tears in my eyes. This touching story with its message of hope and unconditional love has the potential to change lives.
A very powerful anointed well written moving Story!
Excellent.God has surely gifted you to create stories that touch the heart!

In Christ,Dee
"Numbers 6:24,25,26"
Very emotional and very well written!
Well done!!
You managed to pack a lot into a few words. Inspiring and engaging story! Well done!
Congrats on 8th! You got me crying in this one, Deb. Great job.
This was so real, and so close to many homes today. I was concerned, kept my interest and stayed with it, glad of the outcome. God bless ya, littlelight
Welcome back Deb - you came back on a high! Well done. Love always, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
What a wonderful story! Congrats!
Congratulations, Debbie! I too love the way it came full-circle, and I especially admire this one sentence: "A bundle of giggles embraced Maggie Jensen and danced about the room in delight." Beautiful!