The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
God brought her full circle! What a wonderful ending. I truly have tears in my eyes. This touching story with its message of hope and unconditional love has the potential to change lives.
A very powerful anointed well written moving Story!
Excellent.God has surely gifted you to create stories that touch the heart!

In Christ,Dee
"Numbers 6:24,25,26"
10/26/05
Very emotional and very well written!
Well done!!
You managed to pack a lot into a few words. Inspiring and engaging story! Well done!
Congrats on 8th! You got me crying in this one, Deb. Great job.
10/31/05
This was so real, and so close to many homes today. I was concerned, kept my interest and stayed with it, glad of the outcome. God bless ya, littlelight
11/01/05
Welcome back Deb - you came back on a high! Well done. Love always, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
What a wonderful story! Congrats!
11/03/05
Congratulations, Debbie! I too love the way it came full-circle, and I especially admire this one sentence: "A bundle of giggles embraced Maggie Jensen and danced about the room in delight." Beautiful!