The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautifully written. It is hard to imagine life without sight but you did a good job portraying it.
This is beautiful and had me holding my breath and wiping away a tear.
You communicated so much with the challenging word limit! This gripped my heart from the very, most excellent, beginning. Deathbed conversions are tough to write about with authenticity, but I think you did a nice job with this one. Good for you!
I like how you interwove the effects of physical blindness and spiritual blindness. The deathbed scene was very touching, filled with the hope of having loved ones become reconciled to God. Good job.
I really was right there with your MC... hurting with him. And at the same time urging him to believe! Great job.
You told this story well. I liked the parallel between the physical and spiritual blindness. Good job.
Great story. I noticed a few instances of telling rather than showing that might have tightened it and bumped it higher in the ratings - but I can definitely understand why this is a favorite of yours. Well done!