The Official Writing Challenge
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I was on the edge of my seat, reading this one. Nicely written.

Altho' I'm trying to figure out how the title applied (an anorak is a jacket, right?) & I don't quite understand what happened at the end. Maybe some clarification on what a D-SLR is?
Very atmospheric in your description and how you've unwrapped the story. The suspense is very well built-up with a reassuring escape. Well done.
Had to read this one through twice. Needs a lot of work, I agree about having the tenseness thru out though.
As evidenced by your American and Australian commentators,most people outside of the UK wouldn't be familiar with the expression of Anorak to describe a train spotter, plane spotter, etc. One of the challenges of writing for a worldwide audience!
Nevertheless a good story but plenty of tension.