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Powerful story, but I think it would've been more so had Jesus spoken directly to the woman rather than reporting what he said. The quoatations of other characters brought the story to life. I think that moment of healing should be developed more.
I was with you until the last paragraph. If you recall correctly there were many in the crowd that touched Jesus that day, but it was only the one that touched Him with the touch of faith that received her healing. Other than that it was an interesting take on the woman with the issue of blood.
Wonderful feeling here. Good writing.
nice job of getting inside the head of just one of the many people who experienced Jesus' healing at that time.
To experience the touch of the Master will change your life forever. Yes, I know.
Great retelling of this story - vivid, smooth and descriptive. You truly put the reader inside this woman's head and heart!