The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/09
Oh wow, you turned what could've been a cruelty to an opportunity for the MC to bond with her grandchildren. And not giving away she was blind til the end was a great touch. I may be bias because I grew up with a blind mother but I liked this piece.
01/11/10
Very well done with a surprise twist at the end! Congratulations on placing in your level and making the top 40! Have you seen the Writing Challenge Forums? Great job!