The Official Writing Challenge
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Awesome...this is wonderful! What a terrific explanation for the things John was given to see. Good work!
I felt like I was standing right there!
I really liked this.Thanks for this glimpse into what it would be like to hang with John on Patmos...intriguing story and uplifting ending.
This is so beautifully written! My heart responded to your description of The Light, although my brain just can't wrap itself around that glory. Thank you for sharing this.
A wonderful way to decribe the indescribable, without the promise being reduced by John's honest difficulty to fully communicate it. I like how you have emphasised the relationship more than the scenery itself.
Very good, on topic and content is excellent writing. Good job!
Congradulations Clyde, it actually placed higher in my book :).