The Official Writing Challenge
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Funny! Enjoyed the drama and the dialogue. I also appreciate the stories uniqueness. Well done. Okay, I have a question. Does the frig light really turn off once the frig's door is closed?
This was really good.Funny, unique....really cool.Nice concept!Really creative.Two thumbs up!
unique characters. a great laugh.
Oh man, this one was truly a classic. The action was non-stop, the characters were hysterical (loved the whole margarine bit) and the creativity was positively exploding orange all over the fridge!
*sigh* he's baaack... back to his punny best.

This is one of the best 'eye rollin' stories I've read in a long while.
I loved the Hidden Valley Ranch dressing line. Oh, and Fabio lol.

Good stuff, love it.


our own comedy club writer ... well done
This was a very fun read! Thanks for the laugh.
LOL! I especially liked Dr. Pepper! :)
Very humorous indeed! Orange or lime, I still can't make it out. If an orange turns green, it certainly must be quite sick! LoL. Thanks for the enjoyable read. You certainly have a strong casts of characters in your story! (",)
I've totally missed you, Josh. Loved the whole goofy thing. Wonderfully weird;)
Congrats on your highly commended award! You deserved it. Definitely your comical best! The puns were awesome. :)
Congrats on your HC, Josh!! ;)
Not my cup of tea but hey neither are the "Twlight or Harry Potter" books so maybe that imagination of yours will make you famous someday.
Well, Josh...Orange you clever!