The Official Writing Challenge
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OK, Mama Bear, so what happened? Did Jessica stop spreading lies? Did you talk to the principal? I want the rest of the story! LOL
Seriously, great writing with a wonderful message. Loved it.
Blessings, Lynda
Yes, I want the rest, too. How did things turn out? I know you can't tell us now, but you must later! God bless you.
Excellent! I suspect I may know who this is, but one way or the other this is great writing and a great message.
LOL! Hi Wendy. Must confess I thought you were Glenn. He has been posting messages on the board that made me think this was him. Great writing regardless. I was just wrong about the author.
Fantastic writing. I do wonder about the broken up paragraphs toward the end of the story. I believe when you do that you have to keep quotations at the beginning of the new paragraph but leave it off the ending sentence of the paragraph.

God Bless.
Dan Blankenship