The Official Writing Challenge
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I was waitin' for that bar room beat down. Glad it took a good turn.

Good writing!

May God bless!

Dan Blankenship

Enjoyed! Thanks for sharing this. Brings back memories of my snooker days of youth. Thanks. Colin
Wow, great atmosphere at the beginning...I could almost smell the smoke. Glad old Burney set down his pool cue and tended to the Mrs. properly, lol. Wonderful writing!
Hi Patricia,
Thanks for your review on my fairly sheepish effort, but I enjoyed this Irish story, to be sure, to be sure.
I love the way you've brought us to deeper values without preaching.
Well done.