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10/26/09
Great story! Love the outdoorsy atmosphere, and the nice relationship between father and daughter.

I'd have liked a clue as to the daughter's age; she could have been anything from 10 to 40.

I think I'd have a heart attack if ANY large animal licked my foot while I was sleeping!
10/27/09
Interesting and well-written story. I also learned a few things about camping in the wild.