The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
Very moving poem!

The last word in the third line should be "me" to be gramatically correct.

I like your rhyme scheme and the flow of this poem. Very nice.
Hallelujah! What a Savior!
10/09/09
I'm not getting the title, seven causes for red? Maybe seven reasons, seven incidences, but causes? The flow is a little herky-jerky, but the sentiment is certainly understood.