The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this piece! It kept my attention the whole time and was filled with beautiful descriptions.
10/08/09
Outstanding dialogue and your description of overwhelming sensory input gave me a headache just reading it. Excellent work!
Wow, very unique approach to the topic of red. The dialogue was excellent and you did such a good job describing the scene in vivid "colors"! :) Way to go!
10/09/09
Had to find out where this was going and I'm glad it kept my attention until I found out. It kind of reminded me of conversations when I was in Vietnam.
10/09/09
Wonderful! Love all the little sensory details--the chewy drink, the cicadas, etc. Very well done!
10/13/09
Thought provoking, and well done.
10/15/09
I can say is...awesome! Great job on this entry. A wonderful and satisfying read.