The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this unique writing on topic. The interactions were perfect.
09/13/09
I love the way you went out-of-the-box on this one, and made all of your characters adults...and STILL stayed smack dab on topic. Creative!
09/13/09
I love Don's intelligent dialog, and the whole group's dynamic. The little added details, like mopping the sweat from the glass, put me in the middle of scene and the conversation. And the message - oh so important. Great entry!
09/16/09
Wow. Lots to think about here.
09/16/09
The hardest thing for me to deal with as a combat medic in Vietnam was the acts of violence against children. There were people on both sides who didn't have the least respect for human life, especially the children. And, yes, the violent video games parents allow their children to play desensitizes them from feeling the results of cruel acts. Thanks for sharing what you have.