The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/05
I have to admit I wondered if there would be articles on this passage. Wonderful retelling - I enjoyed it very much!
Blessings, Lynda
Loved the way you tied this up with your last line. God bless you.
A beautiful retelling. Loved it! The title and the conclusion were perfect.
02/03/05
Lovely! I could smell and feel the whole place. Great job. Well written!
02/04/05
A lovely, vivid portrayal of the scene. I like how the place was washed clean in the end, cleansed as it were from filthy trading.
02/07/05
Dean, Congratulations on receiving a Highly Commended Award in the Level 3 Champion Challenge. The competition was so strong last week, and we had the highest number of entries ever. You did exceptionally well, and were right there at the end in the semi-finals. It was very close. So well done, be encouraged and keep rising to the Challenge! With love, Deb (Challenge Co-ordinator)