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Glad the misunderstanding was cleared up! I felt for Joanna getting all ready for her special evening, the flowers woven though the story made a lovely detail. Great characters!
I love the way you solved this misunderstanding. The way that Joanna handled her disappointment by changing clothes was very real to life! :)
Oh, those delivery guys. You solved this mix-up with a great twist. A sure-nuff fun read.
Realistic and an enjoyable read.
A fun story! Now that they've solved the mystery, hopefully they'll have a romantic evening, after all. And there's even a pizza on the way... :)
I LOVE your characters! This was a delightful read. I hope you place high with it! Kudos!
Very funny! I would tell you what I thought was the funniest line in the piece but my wife might read this!
Awe! I love how he ran home because she sounded upset and they talked. Communication is so important to a healthy relationship.
I love the how the couple communicated and that it was a mystery. I especially liked that the husband came home when he sensed his wife being upset! That is true love! Well done and very realistic.
Stephanie, this will be perfect as an August Front Page Showcase selection. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page for the week of Augsut 16--and congratulations!