The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/09
A good choice for the topic. I like your conversational writing style.

I found the retelling of creation a little "typical" - too much like the original, if you would. Try to put a bit of yourself into it, so I know I'm not reading it verbatim from His word.

You did a very good job of weaving your message into here. Nice!
Could see this as being in a devotional book. Nice job.