The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/09
This story speaks of unselfish love and those brave enough to give it. Very interesting. The dialog flowed nicely and the descriptions filled my mind with pictures.
01/23/09
Oh, how sad, yet brave of the boy.
01/23/09
In addition, this is an incredible lesson in real love in action.
01/28/09
This wonderfullu told and descriptions were weree penned. Cheers dgford