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You showed the confusion of a person with beginning symptoms very well. I'm glad you kept your MC safe with her husband's help and brought her to the right realization.
Memory is indeed a tricky thing! I'm so glad that she had her husband there to help her and everything and that she came around to seeing what was happening. I was really hoping it wouldn't turn out that she did have it, but you handled it well. ^_^ Good job!