The Official Writing Challenge
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Great title, and I really like the voice of this story.

I'm a bit disoriented by not knowing if the narrator is a man or a woman. And if he/she lived 4 decades of doing his/her own thing, I'd like something to indicate a changed spirit, so that eternal Home will indeed be waiting.
Your title definitely caught my interest. :) I had to smile at your "few things you remember of your early, pre-school days." Since I grew up in Iowa, I want you to know that I correctly pronounced the name of Nevada, Iowa in my mind -- NOT like the state pronunciation. :) I'm thinking "a Judge" and "Debtor's Court" are capitalized for a reason. Nice work on this.
I love your memories - the litanies of do's and don't's made me smile. I also like the ending thoughts of our Heavenly home - I too use those thoughts as comfort in troubled times.