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Topic: Sibling(s) (05/01/08)
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TITLE: From the same womb | Previous Challenge Entry
By Ayanda Kheswa
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The way we clash about everything and nothing,
We are born from the same parents,
Yet, we are bodly individualistic and never team players.
My brother does not consider me as his role model,
Yet, I am the one he calls when all falls apart.
We see life differently,
We live it differently,
We can't help ourselves but criticise each others decisions,
Or mock each others interests,
But, in each triumph and disaster that one of us will face,
The other is there to share in it.
It may seem like we are each others number one enemy,
That is only because we know each other so well,
We will fight at home,
Yet, outside in the world,
We take each others side even if the we are on the wrong side.
We find ourselves bragging about the other to our friends,
We are proud of each other, even though we may never say it to each other.
We did not choose each other,
God did and our parents,
We share a common unbringing whether difficult or beautiful.
Yes, it is that bond that we share, The same womb, same blood running through our veins,
That will connect us for eternity.
Only because he is my brother and I am his big sister.
Now that will never change.
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My favorite part was the ending, "Yes, it is that bond that we share, The same womb, same blood running through our veins,
That will connect us for eternity.
Only because he is my brother and I am his big sister.
Now that will never change." Very nice!
I would like to suggest that you proofread it for spelling and typing mistakes to catch them before you submit your piece.
Good job overall! :)