The Official Writing Challenge
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Awesome! Perfect for the topic. What a super day that was!
LOL.. I often overload my luggage as well! I understand thoroughly!!!
Entertaining story that starts from the title. :)
Having lost luggage a couple of times while traveling, I rolled my eyes when I saw the topic. Glad you were able to see the silver lining in the situation.
You were lucky your luggage arrived intact. My daughter's suitcase was also delivered to her doorstep 24 hours later, but all the christmas gifts she had been given in South Africa were gone, as well as a load of other stuff.
Quick, pithy, and creative. The second paragraph is one big sentence followed by a short one. The long sentence could be improved by removing "finally" and changing the order of the last two words "lone, circling bags."