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I can really relate to this story! My parents were very controlling and I was told that people in the world were evil. I so ell understand your surprise and joy at discovering otherwise. You've done a wonderful job of describing your emotional journey.
I enjoyed the voice of this, and the message. This was an insightful and encouraging read.
This was a lovely, light sort of read. You read it once and wait for it to settle and then you want to go back because it seems to somehow sum up your life. This is great, I liked the descriptions and especially the way you used the phrase "more friends". You made this come alive and the last line with not liking coffee-that made me smile! That was good! ^_^
Ah, the atmosphere and ambiance create a community ripe for the reaching. Go into "ALL THE WORLD"...even the Starbucks world...and preach the gospel. Every time you sit at a table with your gang, you are a sermon that they are anxious to hear and aren't bored or judged. Great story, Joy. Thanks for sharing.