The Official Writing Challenge
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Amazingly vivid and masterfully done. This truly moved me. Wow!
Wow! What an absolutely incredible piece of work this is. You should be very proud of yourself. This is exquisite and I'm stunned beyond words. It is indeed, a pearl.
Some of the descriptions at the beginning tripped me up a little bit, but the further in I got, the more moving the story became. Very nicely done!
What a cycle we can create. Wonderful telling of a sad but oh so prevelant tale. THANKS!