The Official Writing Challenge
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Profoundly clever. Good job.
Great allegory! I liked the comparison and how you made this real by having a map, destinations, etc. You made the whole choice come alive. I was rooting for her to pick something with lasting happines. So glad she chose the road to Heaven. Great job!
Awesome! This is really good!
Well, you got my attention with this marvelous allegory. I love the title and the choices and the characterization of the MC. Really good story and writing.
Although a unique, intriguing and entertaining read - I didn't sense the "urgency" of choosing quickly which would have spelled out the Topic more clearly for me; but enjoyed the read immensely. Very cretive and well written.
Creative and thought-provoking entry. Excellently done.
Congratulations on your 3rd place! It is well-deserved.
Congratulation on your win. Great job!
So clever and so right on topic, loved the delay when the conductor said precrastination. Very well deserved win, congrats!