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11/29/07
Your title grabbed my attention right away. Moving story...

This is my favorite line: Truth be told, I also thought that the total and complete victory would come about in a way that would make me an Erin Brockovich of sorts. In this case, Id be a Christian insurance transformer that wore modest clothes, of course.

Thank goodness you wouldn't conceive of her wardrobe!!!! :)
11/30/07
Super title!

I really enjoyed reading this testimony, and my heart went out to you, knowing first-hand how expensive therapy is. What a wonderful ending!

You used the phrase "total and complete victory" four times, I think. You don't need both "total" and "complete", and perhaps another way of saying it a few times would be good.

Very engaging voice; I liked this.
12/01/07
Nice story. Thank you for sharing!
Laury
12/04/07
Lovely story and great title.
You've captured the essence of God's faithfulness.