The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/05
Very clever! I love the rhythm and creativity. You are very good at this. (Makes me think I know who wrote it. Hmmm...will have to wait and see)
01/25/05
very well written! I love this one.

Kathy
01/26/05
Great ! Thank you for the great read !
01/27/05
This was a good poem and an interesting take on the subject. Good moral in the end, too.
Great the way you wove the story into this. Powerful message at the end, too. God bless you.
01/29/05
The ease with which you penned these lines is excellent. A timely and approprite message couched in readable and rhyming verse!