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You had me smiling all the way through this! I like the MC, especially how he made it through the whole trip, etc. The last line was priceless. Very cute and fun. ^_^
Cute article and well done. For being twelve, that is. LOL :)
Wonderful! This is a well written, positive story! Made me happy while reading it. I really felt for the main character and that last line is a super way to end the story.
It fits "happy" and "confident" too. It seems like all of us have something that makes us feel "twelve" or makes us feel like others think we are "twelve." I know I can relate!

I, too, love the humor of the closing line!