The Official Writing Challenge
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Becky, you are indeed all that! Way ta go girl!
This was so fun to read! I enjoyed the diary format and especially the last few bits. The idea of "all that" is a really great reminder of who we really are. And I can think of quite a few kids who can relate to this! Great job!
This diary story was delightful and had an excellent message. I, too, loved the "all that." That's a great phrase for a child or an adult to remember. I loved the "positive" comment--sounded like something I would have said to my mother when I was young.
I like your style! Great writing!
Very well done! & a great message, too!
I really like this! I think many children (and adults) can relate to the dreaded gym class. It would be fun for children to read.
I loved this story! I could totally relate to it, as I too was a klutz who always hated and dreaded gym class--especially the competitive team games with balls. Beautifully, creatively written in its diary form. The narrrator seemed totally real! Great job!


This was an awesome read! I enjoyed it. I was just like Becky in gym class, but I didn't have a Becky to help me figure it all out. Nice job! Blessings, Cheri
Encouraging entry. Should help some children who have self-image problems. Good job.