The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/07
So, was Chris okay???? I want to know!! :) I liked the guy's positive and adventurous attitude!

You had good dialogue here and a great message of God's care for us! My favorite line was "God nudged Sam's heart from within and parted his fears like a drop of oil in water."

Nice story! :)

06/04/07
Great detail and action. I felt like I was right there.
06/05/07
The line about stripping the plastic off was so original. The story was great, I want more!