The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/07
Sometimes one wonders what the older siblings really thought about baby brother getting to be annointed -- I liked the take on it that you presented. Well written.
06/01/07
I love the conversational voice you used. It definately lent itself well to the big brother image. One of my favorite phrases: "And kinglike? Only if his subjects are destined to be sheep." :-)

06/02/07
I really liked how you brought me into Eliab's presence and held my attention.
Thanks
06/02/07
Enjoyed reading this fresh and creative look at this story of old!
06/05/07
You definitely kept my interest too. I like your last line and how it relates back to the title!
Interesting take on what might have been behind the scenes in this familiar Bible story.
06/08/07
Donna, as a judge, I thought that this was a great piece of writing. You totally drew me in and inspired me :)