The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/07
This is very creative! I am really impressed with the skill here.
05/21/07
This one little snippet:

A love so great that it expends so much waste
To court you, its beloved
Rest; feel kissed and hugged


...gave me shivers! Awesome!

I LOVE this concept. I really believe that we're the only ones. I love everything about this piece. Extremely creative.
Hmmm. This is very thought-provoking. I had to read it twice to grasp the full meaning, it just held so much in so little. I liked the format and especially the names. It just sort of fit.
05/23/07
CREATIVE! I really enjoyed this chill-giving read!
05/23/07
Much to ponder on - excellent.
I see your pov here. I just kinda got lost in space. Maybe another read would help. There's intelligent readers--then there's ME.